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tenderloin Experienced

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I am NY-based consumer so have never really looked at your profile before - I think it is well-written. Although I don't think your profile has either issue, I would say that my two big pet peeves in profiles are:

1. Excessive claims or offers unless you REALLY mean it. For instance, countless guys say "available 24/7" or "call anytime" and then you reach out to them and find out they are at work, or complain about how late you are calling.

2. Guys who tick all the boxes in the Rentmen "I am into" section without meaning it: guys who tick the box for kissing but don't kiss, or rimming but don't rim, etc. etc.

 

I think that just making sure that your profile accurately reflects your services is key.

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Consumer here. I like your profile! Are you still working the dyed hair look? Might not be everyone's thing but if its still yours you should leave it and be honest about it (I like it BTW) otherwise update it with current look. PNP/Drugs are a turn off for many, so would suggest you state your position clearly about this. Do you have a specialty? Something your clients consistently say about you? Put it out there.....and LEAD with it. Daddy pleaser? Good sub? Power Bottom? Ideal Dinner Date? I would lead with the details which are going to draw ppl in (the "hook") and end with logistical issues (host, communication, STD status etc). Lastly, may of your statements are "I" statements, try to change the language to make the statements about the reader/client (reduce/eliminate the I). What is MY experience going to be like? Hope this is helpful and constructive good luck :cool:

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Another client view: I think your description is well balanced and gives me answers to many questions I always have, but that many escorts don’t provide in their descriptions. It’s good marketing and 1.5 years might be too soon to revise a good thing. Those who read it for the first

time, or those considering you over a period of time, will be inspired. Your photo selection is also good. Some stern shots and others showing your attractive smile, covering those who want either or both.

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Keith30309 Grand Master

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There were lots of good suggestions here: https://m4m-forum.org/threads/what-are-the-better-rentmen-profiles-and-why.118258/

 

 

Profiles that catch my attention:

  • Make me believe he is professional and reliable.
  • Project a fun personality. A sense of humor is a turn on.
  • Are positive in tone... I’m amazed when I see profiles that contain complaints about bad clients and threats to block bothersome inquiries. I’m not going to consider someone who’s going to walk in the door with a sour attitude.
  • I like a dick/ass as much as the next person but can get a much better sense of compatibility by informal G-rated face pics.
  • Same for videos. The close-up vids of fucking aren’t at all attractive to me. I’d rather see 90-120 seconds of someone talking about himself. https://rentmen.eu/Jecht/ <- FUN !

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FrancisCA Rising Star

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I am NY-based consumer so have never really looked at your profile before - I think it is well-written. Although I don't think your profile has either issue, I would say that my two big pet peeves in profiles are:

1. Excessive claims or offers unless you REALLY mean it. For instance, countless guys say "available 24/7" or "call anytime" and then you reach out to them and find out they are at work, or complain about how late you are calling.

2. Guys who tick all the boxes in the Rentmen "I am into" section without meaning it: guys who tick the box for kissing but don't kiss, or rimming but don't rim, etc. etc.

 

I think that just making sure that your profile accurately reflects your services is key.

 

Wow no kissing or rimming? BORING

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Consumer here. I like your profile! Are you still working the dyed hair look? Might not be everyone's thing but if its still yours you should leave it and be honest about it (I like it BTW) otherwise update it with current look. PNP/Drugs are a turn off for many, so would suggest you state your position clearly about this. Do you have a specialty? Something your clients consistently say about you? Put it out there.....and LEAD with it. Daddy pleaser? Good sub? Power Bottom? Ideal Dinner Date? I would lead with the details which are going to draw ppl in (the "hook") and end with logistical issues (host, communication, STD status etc). Lastly, may of your statements are "I" statements, try to change the language to make the statements about the reader/client (reduce/eliminate the I). What is MY experience going to be like? Hope this is helpful and constructive good luck :cool:

 

Thanks I put my drug preferences on there which is none and changed stuff around! And yes I still have colored hair I always seem to color it every season great that you like it!

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No doubt you are a cutie....consumers like to SEE the goods. Some are ass men, some are cock men.... some just like "personality...so try to show as much of yourself physically and intellectually.... You are off to a good start with you pic selections.

It give the consumer a good idea of what they are getting.... just do what feels right and gets you the results you want..... And remember, you cant please EVERYONE.... so don't even try.

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Another client view: I think your description is well balanced and gives me answers to many questions I always have, but that many escorts don’t provide in their descriptions. It’s good marketing and 1.5 years might be too soon to revise a good thing. Those who read it for the first

time, or those considering you over a period of time, will be inspired. Your photo selection is also good. Some stern shots and others showing your attractive smile, covering those who want either or both.

 

Thank you so much! TBH I wasnt asking for people to read my own profile BUT this has been super super helpful!

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There were lots of good suggestions here: https://m4m-forum.org/threads/what-are-the-better-rentmen-profiles-and-why.118258/

 

 

Profiles that catch my attention:

  • Make me believe he is professional and reliable.
  • Project a fun personality. A sense of humor is a turn on.
  • Are positive in tone... I’m amazed when I see profiles that contain complaints about bad clients and threats to block bothersome inquiries. I’m not going to consider someone who’s going to walk in the door with a sour attitude.
  • I like a dick/ass as much as the next person but can get a much better sense of compatibility by informal G-rated face pics.
  • Same for videos. The close-up vids of fucking aren’t at all attractive to me. I’d rather see 90-120 seconds of someone talking about himself. https://rentmen.eu/Jecht/ <- FUN !

Oh wow I have thought about posting vlog style videos before

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Keith30309 Grand Master

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Oh wow I have thought about posting vlog style videos before

I love those vids and if I had a profile I’d probably take a similar approach of combo sensuality and fun personality.

This is just me but I engage guys based more on emotional intelligence & personality than the appearance of their genitals or anus. It’d be like hiring a lawyer based on his algebra skills.

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A follow-up thought.

 

Never forget this is an interpersonal, human-being business. That said, I see many guys online who give it all away up front, leaving behind nothing to the imagination for the in-person meet. The mystery is gone because, frankly, there wasn't any to begin with.

 

Why buy the cow when you can get the milk for free?

 

With online attention spans at an all-time low, it's still possible to give clients (or any audience) a good show and be in control of how much of yourself you're putting out there.

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It’s friendly, it’s simple, but reads a bit like a resume. I have read this profile many times over elsewhere. Elaborate on what sets you apart from the rest. It could be more personable.

I know I try to stray away from making it look to resume-y

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I love those vids and if I had a profile I’d probably take a similar approach of combo sensuality and fun personality.

This is just me but I engage guys based more on emotional intelligence & personality than the appearance of their genitals or anus. It’d be like hiring a lawyer based on his algebra skills.

Alternatively I have hired based on the appearance of a boy's anus lol... I guess i'm a connoisseur of the smooth pink puckers

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No doubt you are a cutie....consumers like to SEE the goods. Some are ass men, some are cock men.... some just like "personality...so try to show as much of yourself physically and intellectually.... You are off to a good start with you pic selections.

It give the consumer a good idea of what they are getting.... just do what feels right and gets you the results you want..... And remember, you cant please EVERYONE.... so don't even try.

Thank you so much!

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