Suggestions Needed for Lynden's Site!

[LyndenDC]

This is Lynden and escort from Washington DC and my new site is http://www.rentlynden.com. I actually have never posted anything here before, but have read a few postings about me. I have just created a new site for myself and I knew of no better place to get suggestions than here. So, please check it out and give me your feed back. Let me know what needs to be changed or added. I really appreciate it and I figured since many of you "hire" guys like me (cute, sweet, young bois HA HA) then your advice is over the utmost value to me. I dont know if this type of thing is suppose to be posted here and I hope I didnt break some type of rule. Thanks again in advance for helping me out and I look forward to posting many more conversations with you guys! :-)

[+ purplekow]

Did a cursory review of your website. It was okay.

A wider variety of pictures in different settings which tell a little bit about you might be nice. The pictures are hot but generic.

Only two shot show your face and any part of your body. While you may not want to have a facial picture totally nude, a picture in shorts or underwear might add a little spice to the faceless body pictures.

You might include some of your interests, pursuits or plans. For example, if I were planning a ski weekend, I would check out a web page more if there was a picture or a statement of interest in that.

 

Good luck with your work in progress. Great body.

[ted]

For someone just starting out he's doing really well in my book. The pics are very functional and really show what he looks like, and quite a few head shots not smudged. They are somewhat redundant, so could be edited down some without losing any info. I really do like to see not only the body but the face too, the downside being pics do tend to pop up at the most inconvenient moments. It is ill advised to have face shots with a nude body on the internet if you have aspirations of making it in the business world someday. Overall, for a guy new to the biz and a brand new website I'd say "good job". A bit more about your special interests in the text may be in order. Snow skier, water sports(not that kind), Europe, Asia Pacific, etc. But from what he's got there already I've got the impression he would like a dinner at a nice restaurant, a show and some bedroom gymnastics, and if all the above were in London or Paris or Tokyo or Sydney, he certainly would be happy to cum along.

[EXPAT]

I think the site is well done - one of the best escort sites I've seen.

 

You may consider a link to reviews.

[alanalt]

>I think the site is well done - one of the best escort sites

>I've seen.

>

>You may consider a link to reviews.

 

Apparently, you didn't look closely enough at the side-bar as there are links to both submit and read reviews...

[Guest zipperzone]

Well Lynden - I'll say one thing for you....

 

YOU SURE DO HAVE A GREAT ASS.

[Louis]

You have a nice web site. Not overly fancy, but to me it looks like you used store bought computer program for making web sites and web pages. That being said, it is very easy to navigate around, and the pictures are great. I agree with those who say you should have pictures of yourself in underwear...briefs to be specific. I would really like to see what your legs look like.

You are very handsome, have a great physique (and that is an understatement). You should be really commended on how you look after yourself, and how you are able to keep your body fat in check.

One other thing to think about......MOVE TO CANADA!!!!! FORT FRANCES to be specific....:0-)

Louis

[Epigonos]

Well since nobody else seems to have done so let me welcome you to this board. Great to have you joining us.

I agree with much already said. Generally I like the your site but would edit some of the photos and try for more variation. I always think going to a good erotic photographer is well worth the expense. These guys know their business and are able to come up with ideas most people would never think of. If you don't want the phtographs used in print simple don't sign a release. I believe rentboy has a list of photographers with their web site so you can select one whose work appeals to you. Good luck and I for one would love to see you visit Southern California

[Epigonos]

Well since nobody else seems to have done so let me welcome you to this board. Great to have you joining us.

I agree with much already said. Generally I like the your site but would edit some of the photos and try for more variation. I always think going to a good erotic photographer is well worth the expense. These guys know their business and are able to come up with ideas most people would never think of. If you don't want the phtographs used in print simple don't sign a release. I believe rentboy has a list of photographers with their web site so you can select one whose work appeals to you. Good luck and I for one would love to see you visit Southern California

[LyndenDC]

Hi there guys! First, THANKS SO MUCH for being kind and thoughtful when it comes to your suggestions! I’m sure you can understand how important your feedback is for me. Now, I just need a day or so to actually make of few changes. As I said before, I have never actually posted anything here before, but by the response you guys have given me thus far I must say all of you have been most kind and I defiantly plan on posting more thoughts.

 

Also, I know some people have posted a few things about me here in the past, which I welcome of course. This being said, if anyone ever has any questions for me, please don’t hesitate to ask. I would be more than welcome to answer any questions you might have. Also, if any of you have any other advice, I’m always open to suggestions. And still, if you have any other suggestions about my site I’m all ears!

 

P.S. I'll probably post this same message in the other spot I posted my orig. message on. Please don't take offense to that. I told you I'm new, and I've learned to post in one spot. :-)

[LyndenDC]

Hi there guys! First, THANKS SO MUCH for being kind and thoughtful when it comes to your suggestions! I’m sure you can understand how important your feedback is for me. Now, I just need a day or so to actually make of few changes. As I said before, I have never actually posted anything here before, but by the response you guys have given me thus far I must say all of you have been most kind and I defiantly plan on posting more thoughts.

 

Also, I know some people have posted a few things about me here in the past, which I welcome of course. This being said, if anyone ever has any questions for me, please don’t hesitate to ask. I would be more than welcome to answer any questions you might have. Also, if any of you have any other advice, I’m always open to suggestions. And still, if you have any other suggestions about my site I’m all ears!

 

P.S. I'll probably post this same message in the other spot I posted my orig. message on. Please don't take offense to that. I told you I'm new, and I've learned to post in one spot. :-)

[Guest PWIT]

>This is Lynden and escort from Washington DC and my new site

>is http://www.rentlynden.com. I actually have never posted anything

>here before, but have read a few postings about me. I have

>just created a new site for myself and I knew of no better

>place to get suggestions than here. So, please check it out

>and give me your feed back. Let me know what needs to be

>changed or added. I really appreciate it and I figured since

>many of you "hire" guys like me (cute, sweet, young bois HA

>HA) then your advice is over the utmost value to me. I dont

>know if this type of thing is suppose to be posted here and I

>hope I didnt break some type of rule. Thanks again in advance

>for helping me out and I look forward to posting many more

>conversations with you guys! :-)

 

Hey Lyndon - welcome. Look forward to your future input to the message center. Congrats on the recent graduation.

 

I think you got a great start with your website. I think you have some very hot pics - especially the ass shots! You have been blessed with great looks - and what a set of mesmerizing peepers! I really liked the webcam shots in addition to the professional shots - nice touch.

 

I do echo the suggestions about adding shots in underwear (but no thongs please! LOL). Have you thought about adding a video clip? Something short and tame with a verbal (or should I say oral) greeting would be a nice addition.

 

You are in my neck of the woods. Now normally I do not play with the locals (thus my ID here), but I must admit a moment of weakness when I contacted you via email. The timing didn't work out, but your correspondence was very pleasant and professional. If I don't catch you on the road in the future, I am sure I will succumb to another moment of weakness sometime in the future and violate my tenant for seeing locals. Until then....

 

PWIT

[Guest PWIT]

>This is Lynden and escort from Washington DC and my new site

>is http://www.rentlynden.com. I actually have never posted anything

>here before, but have read a few postings about me. I have

>just created a new site for myself and I knew of no better

>place to get suggestions than here. So, please check it out

>and give me your feed back. Let me know what needs to be

>changed or added. I really appreciate it and I figured since

>many of you "hire" guys like me (cute, sweet, young bois HA

>HA) then your advice is over the utmost value to me. I dont

>know if this type of thing is suppose to be posted here and I

>hope I didnt break some type of rule. Thanks again in advance

>for helping me out and I look forward to posting many more

>conversations with you guys! :-)

 

Hey Lyndon - welcome. Look forward to your future input to the message center. Congrats on the recent graduation.

 

I think you got a great start with your website. I think you have some very hot pics - especially the ass shots! You have been blessed with great looks - and what a set of mesmerizing peepers! I really liked the webcam shots in addition to the professional shots - nice touch.

 

I do echo the suggestions about adding shots in underwear (but no thongs please! LOL). Have you thought about adding a video clip? Something short and tame with a verbal (or should I say oral) greeting would be a nice addition.

 

You are in my neck of the woods. Now normally I do not play with the locals (thus my ID here), but I must admit a moment of weakness when I contacted you via email. The timing didn't work out, but your correspondence was very pleasant and professional. If I don't catch you on the road in the future, I am sure I will succumb to another moment of weakness sometime in the future and violate my tenant for seeing locals. Until then....

 

PWIT

[+ ArVaGuy]

Lynden,

 

Welcome to the message center and I certainly hope you will become an active participant here. I am sure you have “lurked” around a bit and are aware of our sometimes comical goings on. What makes this site unique and vibrant (at least to me) is the number of escorts who take the chance and become active participants in the discussions and exchanges in these forums. Yes, you will need a strong shield at times when things get uh....interesting around here. Heck, if Scott Adler can keep coming back for more then why not you as well?

 

In regard to your site it’s very nice and I found it easy to navigate. I appreciate that you did not create any flash presentations or added some god-awful techno sound track for your intro. Keep in mind that not everyone is on a high speed connection.

 

Other posters have made some very good suggestions. You should consider adding a full photo shot dressed in a suit. Not just the one showing that hot six pack. As a DC area resident one thing I look at is whether or not I can take a particular escort out in this town to various functions. Not too many DC guys give me the impression they are able to carry off such niceties. Consquently, I have hired traveling guys for such.

 

I hope you find these and the other suggestions helpful and that we will see you around the MC from time to time. Also I may have to get a close up view of those abs and those low hangers one of these days. :9

[LyndenDC]

Silly silly man! Why not see one of the locals if he's ..... sweet... cute.... trustworthy (although I suppose that must be proven).... and who had "really nice peepers?" Of course you should contact me again... although if it's only during a moment of weakness I'll have to make sure you have more of those moments! I joke of course. Seriously, you are more than welcome to contact me ANYTIME... and I will do my best to earn your "trust." Oh, and thanks for the suggestions!!

[Guest PWIT]

>Of course you

>should contact me again... although if it's only during a

>moment of weakness I'll have to make sure you have more of

>those moments!

 

Maybe that is what I am afraid of - that you will cause me to have those moments too often....and being local...well then I would be in the poor house! :+

[LyndenDC]

Hum.... well, we wouldnt want that. After all, the poor house leads to no house at all.... If that would happen I wouldnt be able to live with myself, so I would have to invite you to move in with me! :-)

[+ deej]

> and who had "really nice peepers?"

 

http://www.dfapam.com/lynden05.jpg

 

Is THAT what they're called these days? :+ :o :9 :*

[Guest PWIT]

>Hum.... well, we wouldnt want that. After all, the poor

>house leads to no house at all.... If that would happen I

>wouldnt be able to live with myself, so I would have to invite

>you to move in with me! :-)

 

Well, you can just move in with me now and save us both all the trouble!

[Lookin]

Actually, the cum shot and a phone number would do it for me!

[+ glutes]

I need the vapors!

[jawjateck]

Lynden.....Welcome to Hooville! Nice site, nice pics, nice package! Yummmmmmmm! :9

 

Dang it all....I had just finalized my wish list for 07, and now I'm gonna have to amend it to squeeze in a side trip to DC. Happy New Year to you, Lynden, and best wishes!

[Guest PWIT]

Lynden, another critique/suggestion for you to ponder. Most of your information is in first person. But there are a few written in third person - see below:

 

"Welcome to the website of Lynden Thomas. Here you will find Lynden’s photos, you can read a few of Lynden’s thoughts, as well as find out other information about Lynden."

 

I'm personally not a fan of speaking in third person but understand it does have its purpose. But switching between first and third can be confusing.

 

Anyway...that is what PWIT thinks. :+

[Barry]

And it looks like you can see more of this ass here as well. http://www.amateurgo.com/cody/sebastien/rckjc.html

 

Barry

[LyndenDC]

Hi again guys! I really cant say how nice you guys have been. I was hesitant before about posting anything because I was "afraid" to to be honest! I'm very glad I did... if for nothing more than to meet so many new great people!

 

As for my site... I've gotten your suggestions and check back tomorrow and I should have made some of the changes! Thanks again... I look forward to talking to you more very soon!