what can i change to be better?

[Yeison]

hi everyone, so I'm first timer in the website wich i find its really useful for clients and Models.

 

please visit my rentmen acc www.rentmen.com/fallenangel and also featuring my pornhub channel YVARONI posting my videos there so you guys can have free access to my movies.

[Guy Fawkes]

Create a signature so that you have your info on the bottom of every post.

 

Stop blurring your photos, your tattoos are more distinctive than what your blurring protects.

 

Ask Ask Ask turns a lot of clients off.

 

Less Photos, updated more often.

 

Visit Las Vegas and take Daddy to lunch. You have three things that he likes: Short, Muscular, and Latino.

[Yeison]

Create a signature so that you have your info on the bottom of every post.

 

Stop blurring your photos, your tattoos are more distinctive than what your blurring protects.

 

Ask Ask Ask turns a lot of clients off.

 

Visit Las Vegas and take Daddy to lunch. You have three things that he likes: Short, Muscular, and Latino.

how do i create the signature?

[Yeison]

lol aboute VEgas, i have to think about it first.

[Guy Fawkes]

Click on your name at the top of the page. Left column of the popup, 1st row: "Signature" Don't go crazy, one or two lines will do ya.

 

how do i create the signature?

[Guy Fawkes]

I took a liberty... You can change it if you wish.

[+ José Soplanucas]

hi everyone, so I'm first timer in the website wich i find its really useful for clients and Models.

 

please visit my rentmen acc www.rentmen.com/fallenangel and also featuring my pornhub channel YVARONI posting my videos there so you guys can have free access to my movies.

 

Welcome to the forum. @Guy Fawkes likes you, is the first time I see giving such a warm welcoming and instant feedback!

 

This is a great place for you to advertise you and build your network. I have been in contact with you in Rentmen (en espanol), and I am looking forward for you next visit to DC.

[Yeison]

Welcome to the forum. @Guy Fawkes likes you, is the first time I see giving such a warm welcoming and instant feedback!

 

This is a great place for you to advertise you and build your network. I have been in contact with you in Rentmen (en espanol), and I am looking forward for you next visit to DC.

Awww thanks cutie, well i will be visiting DC may 4th to 8th hosting at Kellog Hotel in Noma

[Yeison]

I took a liberty... You can change it if you wish.

It's great, thanks a lot Guy

[+ José Soplanucas]

By the way, I have friends who hired Fallenangel before he left DC and they are very happy. And for karaoke lovers, check his clips in his RM ad, he can sing!

[maninsoma]

Clicking through 50 photos is a lot, and some of the most enticing ones are towards the end of the group. Some people might stop looking before they see you at your best, so I think that reducing the number of photos on Rentmen would be a good thing. Maybe solicit some feedback from clients on which photos they like best.

[Yeison]

Clicking through 50 photos is a lot, and some of the most enticing ones are towards the end of the group. Some people might stop looking before they see you at your best, so I think that reducing the number of photos on Rentmen would be a good thing. Maybe solicit some feedback from clients on which photos they like best.

I really thought about it but I reallyb did it to avoid the fact of send more pic during the chat time.

[Yeison]

By the way, I have friends who hired Fallenangel before he left DC and they are very happy. And for karaoke lovers, check his clips in his RM ad, he can sing!

Aww thanks, so cute

[+ azdr0710]

welcome to the forum.....stay safe and sharp!......don't take all this too seriously.....Guy will give you excellent advice......

[Yeison]

welcome to the forum.....stay safe and sharp!......don't take all this too seriously.....Guy will give you excellent advice......

Awww thanks, so sweet.

[bigvalboy]

please visit my rentmen acc www.rentmen.com/fallenangel and also featuring my pornhub channel YVARONI posting my videos there so you guys can have free access to my movies.

 

Checking roundtrip airfares to NYC...

[Yeison]

Checking roundtrip airfares to NYC...

Lol just let me know with prior time, clients are always flying me everywhere so I'm mostly out of town sometimes.

[Yeison]

This is me just right now guys, no filter, no blurr, just natural. People who knows me knows I am 100% the real guy on the pics.

[rvwnsd]

Welcome to the forum. After reading this post in the afternoon I checked out your ad and started replying with some suggestions, but duty called and I had to get back to work. (I was using my personal laptop and working from home). You have made some changes to your ad (improvements, actually) such as removing the word "party" from the top of the text and doing some proofreading. Good job.

 

Based on your comment about fending off a shark when you lived in your country and the way your ad is written, I'm guessing American English is not your first language. If I was you, I would sit down with someone and ask them to help you proofread and re-write your ad. Obtaining help writing it would help improve the way your ad reads.

 

You have thanked almost every member who has provided suggestions, and that is also a good thing to do. It tells us that we are appreciated. It also tells us that you are likely to show that appreciation to us if we were to hire you. Again, good job.

[Yeison]

Welcome to the forum. After reading this post in the afternoon I checked out your ad and started replying with some suggestions, but duty called and I had to get back to work. (I was using my personal laptop and working from home). You have made some changes to your ad (improvements, actually) such as removing the word "party" from the top of the text and doing some proofreading. Good job.

 

Based on your comment about fending off a shark when you lived in your country and the way your ad is written, I'm guessing American English is not your first language. If I was you, I would sit down with someone and ask them to help you proofread and re-write your ad. Obtaining help writing it would help improve the way your ad reads.

 

You have thanked almost every member who has provided suggestions, and that is also a good thing to do. It tells us that we are appreciated. It also tells us that you are likely to show that appreciation to us if we were to hire you. Again, good job.

Aww thanks, I was still studying English back when I wrote my Interviw on RM, I have forget to write another one now my English got a 100% better, I was born in Miami but my mom took me back to her country to raise me there so my first language it's been Spanish but so happy I got back to my country USA to get my second language and improve myself education wise.

[rvwnsd]

Aww thanks, I was still studying English back when I wrote my Interviw on RM, I have forget to write another one now my English got a 100% better, I was born in Miami but my mom took me back to her country to raise me there so my first language it's been Spanish but so happy I got back to my country USA to get my second language and improve myself education wise.

You are welcome. Funny how we get busy and then forget to do things. If you are me, you remember at times like shopping at the supermarket (when the task I remember has nothing to do with food or shopping).

 

I would definitely re-answer now that you are more proficient in English. At one time I was fluent in German. These days, I wouldn't even TRY to write a profile in German. Kudos to you for knowing three languages!