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Colin's Review on 10/17


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This has to be one of my all time favorite lines in a review:

 

"Then he sprang for a shower, his cock bobbing in front of him, his firm ass catching the candlelight as he headed to the john to enjoy my stash of Kiehl's scrubs and shampoos."

Guest zipperzone
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>There is an annual contest to come up with the worst opening

>line for a novel. I believe with some minor modifications,

>that sentence is a potential winner.

 

I don't think it needs any modification at all.....

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It's Sunday and I just read the review of 10/17. ...another "great" read and an enticing assessment for a future encounter!

 

I liked the writer's way with words; they made me ever so interested in meeting Colin!

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> I believe with some minor modifications, that sentence is a potential winner.

 

After springing and bobbing and catching the light,

He then scrubbed and shampooed in the loo through the night.

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