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on my website, please send me a private message!

 

My top concerns were

 

- the content

 

- the layout

 

- user friendliness / ease of use

 

- my rates (fair or unfair)

 

Send anything else in the message that needs some love.

 

Thank you! :)

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Very well done!

 

A few suggestions:

You have such a handsome face. On your main page (with the terms of use), I would put one of the pics with you smiling. That's a warm welcome to someone who clicked on some link to get there, and may offset some of the cold and distancing legalese that otherwise gives the site's first impression.

I would link your "testimonials" page directly to your reviews on this site. It seems more authentic when relayed by a third party.

On your "bespoke" page, you say You may subcribe to the list in the box right below this question. No such box appears, and subscribe is misspelled (as is Florida above).

On your "services" page, incorporates and intuitive are misspelled. Lose the apostrophe in it's.

On your "about" page, describe and rendezvous are misspelled.

 

Congrats on a great site, and welcome to the biz!

 

Kevin Slater

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Another thought: if it's not too late to change, I'm not a fan of using a geographical description in an email address. No biggie, but at some point you'll move to, say, Boston and the hunterleefl will just be a bit awkward.

 

Kevin Slater

Posted
Very well done!

 

A few suggestions:

You have such a handsome face. On your main page (with the terms of use), I would put one of the pics with you smiling. That's a warm welcome to someone who clicked on some link to get there, and may offset some of the cold and distancing legalese that otherwise gives the site's first impression.

I would link your "testimonials" page directly to your reviews on this site. It seems more authentic when relayed by a third party.

On your "bespoke" page, you say You may subcribe to the list in the box right below this question. No such box appears, and subscribe is misspelled (as is Florida above).

On your "services" page, incorporates and intuitive are misspelled. Lose the apostrophe in it's.

On your "about" page, describe and rendezvous are misspelled.

 

Congrats on a great site, and welcome to the biz!

 

Kevin Slater

 

Thank you! I made the spelling changes that somehow flew past me :p, great suggestions. Still working on my monthly subscribe list, hoping it have it done later this week.

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Another thought: if it's not too late to change, I'm not a fan of using a geographical description in an email address. No biggie, but at some point you'll move to, say, Boston and the hunterleefl will just be a bit awkward.

 

Kevin Slater

 

I noticed the changes and I think the site looks more personable now. All very professional looking. I do agree with Kevin, the hunterleefl is a bit awkward. I noticed the email seemed a bit awkward the first time, but didn't realize why, until Kevin pointed it out. All the best to you...

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