Hard review to write... Id like opinions

[NYTomcat]

Ok so three of Us posters hire one escort. Raul Manzo to "escort" us around NY. To say he did an unbelievable job is just the tip of the iceberg. But as we had experiences togther and seperate its been a real question on how to sing his praises properly. It is our inclination to write one joint review as the experience all runs together in one giant hire and the review would seem disjointed and not give the full picture of what the man could do. Yet obviously its much harder with three seperate voices.

 

Any thoughts? This seems to be quite the different hire from anything we have had reviewed before

[AdamSmith]

How about: Each of you write your own version of the encounter, and sign it. Then chain the 3 together, one after another, each section signed by its author, and submit them as a single review.

[+ deej]

You should probably write to Daddy to ask his advice. He (and only he) knows the underlying database and software structure and what it will/won't support.

 

At minimum, use email to co-author a few paragraphs on the "shared experiences", clearly labeling those paragraphs as "shared experiences", and then each of you could paste that into your individual review of the private experiences.

 

(And for Raul: SCORE! )

[JT Brooklyn]

3 on 1! I doubt that will ever happen again! I guess "Orgy Scenarios" are still happening!

 

Here I thought Krsiten Bjorn was the only one doing them now! LOL

[NYTomcat]

You should probably write to Daddy to ask his advice. He (and only he) knows the underlying database and software structure and what it will/won't support.

 

At minimum, use email to co-author a few paragraphs on the "shared experiences", clearly labeling those paragraphs as "shared experiences", and then each of you could paste that into your individual review of the private experiences.

 

 

 

(And for Raul: SCORE! )

 

Well this is what we have been working on with each writing the pieces we alone know and then stringing them together jointly with common language. We are writing it as third person omniscient narrative so its no one mans voice rather like an outsider telling the story. I think it will be Better as one great review for an incredible multiday experience than three more bland reviews of individual encounters that all were mindblowing but just review alot of the same ground.

 

So thats my position that we should take the three viewpoints agree on one version of the multiple person scenarios between the four posters, oh yeah at one point another poster joined us out at a club, then each write out our sections on our individual time with raul and the whole thing could then be strung together as one big review. Given the wide breadth of our interests from Me (Mr BFE passion Guy) to Whipped Guy (well his name says it all) I think the joint review as one giant discussion of the whole affair shows just how flexible Raul is. I mean I think that gives a whole new meaning to the term versatile. And given How well he guided the time together and found ways for us all to.. well thats the review. But I think his versatility need to be shown and one review does that best... but Im not certain enough not to want to hear opposing arguments. or support

[doitb4ugo]

Our few days with Raul was quite a unique experience. It was a wonderful blending of hot action, friendship and some fun activities like out trip to The Leatherman where Raul was intimately fitted for a skin tight pair of neoprene shorts. The attention to Raul's fit by the salesman was priceless. All this was made possible by Raul's willingness to play our time together by ear and easily mix escorting, hanging-out and even some brief fuck-buddy activity....

 

We are trying very hard to get this to come across in the review.I cannot think of an escort that would be as capable or even willing to take on such a assingment as Raul during these few days...

[whipped guy]

Actually the shorts were latex as I recall... but...

 

Yes... it is amazing that upon meeting Raul for the first time I felt I had known him all my life... We had "spoken" via private message... and shared certain interests... but he was so different from what I imagined... better than I imagined... Ironically the stuff behind closed doors somehow is not ingrained in my memory banks... rather it is Raul's persona that I recall and remember most vividly about those amazing two days... The fun time at the Leatheman, the conversation at supper and then breakfast at the hotel... I could go on and on... That is what needs to somehow be a major focus of this review... and as doit has said it might be difficult to put into words...

[NYTomcat]

I think thats why I was having so much trouble. How do you describe what Raul was able to accomplish. Beyond his own acts of sexual prowess. How do you describe without all three of us the way he assured that others were noticing us and giving us attention. Truly Raul was an escort.

. In the truest sense of the word. As well as in the most commonly used definition.

[Juan Vancouver]

Raul, hats off!

 

You guys really chose the best of the best. I am not surprised at all that you had such an amazing experience.

 

However you write it, make haste. I am dying to read it. Sometimes I feel that I learn so much about escorting when I read a good review.

 

...Three! Nice!

 

My mind is reeling....

 

Ok, have to go take care of something urgently.

[+ sf westcoaster]

Just write it!! Stop stressing - you owe it to Raul to get a review published.

[Steven_Draker]

Raul rules! Congrats, buddy.

 

So, was it neoprene or latex ...?

[NYTomcat]

Raul rules! Congrats, buddy.

 

So, was it neoprene or latex ...? [/color]

 

It was a weekend with three varying clients it was all of the above plus leather and denim and alot of gear.

[NYTomcat]

Just write it!! Stop stressing - you owe it to Raul to get a review published.

 

Relax SF its being written as we speak its just a matter of how to submit. Trust me

[NYTomcat]

Raul, hats off!

 

You guys really chose the best of the best. I am not surprised at all that you had such an amazing experience.

 

However you write it, make haste. I am dying to read it. Sometimes I feel that I learn so much about escorting when I read a good review.

 

...Three! Nice!

 

My mind is reeling....

 

Ok, have to go take care of something urgently.

 

Ok next time Juan im importing you to come along. Raul and you would be to much fun methinks.

[Juan Vancouver]

Ok next time Juan im importing you to come along. Raul and you would be to much fun methinks.

 

I like the way you think! Where do I sign?

 

Sorry, I have a very private and terribly urgent business to deal with.

 

(Do you know that Aveda makes a cream that is called "Hand relief"?)

 

(No I am not joking!)

 

gotta run!

[+ Axiom2001]

I am on board with what deej, juan, and sf westcoaster presented! Just do it, please! I will be awaiting a stunning read as well as more enticements as to why I should avail myself to see Raul next year during the spring in Chicago!!! -

[+ purplekow]

This Review Raw and Piece Next time Raul comes here and then you all go to Chicago Tail of Two Cities

Tom As far as I know, no Pulitzers for Escort Reviews. Include as much flesh as possible and call it a day.

[whipped guy]

This Review Raw and Piece Next time Raul comes here and then you all go to Chicago Tail of Two Cities

Excellent idea... plus I am told there are better bondage clubs in Chicago!

Tom As far as I know, no Pulitzers for Escort Reviews.

Well, Tom's contribution to the saga might just change that!!!

Include as much flesh as possible and call it a day.

We have been working on this and I for one am going to call it a night...

 

However, I would bet that Tom will be working it deep into the night...

[doitb4ugo]

Raul rules! Congrats, buddy.

 

So, was it neoprene or latex ...? [/color]

 

The shorts Raul tried on at The Leatherman were........the review will get it right.

[Diverdan]

Well guys... after all of this build up, I hope you put some pictures of your escapades on the Forum. Perhaps they go in the Gallery, or the Fetish Forum, but reading the review will not satiate our fantasy and questions... ONLY PICTURES can do that...and, I am sure that you took pictures or video... you know we are all jealous!

[whipped guy]

I didn't take any pics... but...

 

Tomcat and Doit... you did take pictures didn't you???!!!

I am sure that you took pictures or video...

[JT Brooklyn]

Tomcat and Doit... you did take pictures didn't you???!!!

 

I'm sure that any Pix's taken will be for "Personal Use Only"..As Raul doesnot Publicly have any Face shots on the Internet?

 

Then again "Body Shots" are a different Story!

[NYTomcat]

:eek:Im sorry boys only one photo of a tied up bavarian and myself That I am keeping private. Very private. Especially since I can't get a release signed by the Bavarian. Its kind of awkward I can't really ask. I dont know who he is. And he has already given me multiple releases.

[KMEM]

If you are bragging.....stop, stop, don't stop.

 

If you are using hyperbole, you may advance to the geometry class.

 

Best regards,

KMEM

[whipped guy]

:eek:Im sorry boys only one photo of a tied up bavarian and myself That I am keeping private. Very private. Especially since I can't get a release signed by the Bavarian. Its kind of awkward I can't really ask. I dont know who he is. And he has already given me multiple releases.

Tomcat... I plan to visit the NYBC this Sunday... if the Bavarian is there and I can get a release out of him do I get to see the pic??? I want to keep this all legal... Actually, I saw what happened in real time... and it was something right out of a XXX-rated porno flick...