Feedback on my website

[+ Lance_Navarro]

Yes they are great, but WHERE IS THE PIC OF HIS BUTTS????

Well, I don't have "butts", just have the one. Here it is, if you really wanna see it. ;-Phttp://s28.postimg.org/nn6lri13x/image.jpg

[mike carey]

The only place where i stumbled is when you listed your location as "United States"

Context! When I posted last week that I was in the US it was specific! But then I'm special. lol.

[+ José Soplanucas]

Thanks so much for saying that! I have put alot of energy and love into creating my site. Definitely get in touch if you find yourself heading to SF.

Sorry Lance, I was talking about the lack of those pics at the OP's website.

[BabyBoomer]

I was talking about the lack of those pics at the OP's website.

 

I agree. However, there is one ass pic on his Rentmen ad.

 

~Boomer ~

[Ken Woods]

Thanks for all the feedback everyone! You guys are the best. I'll definitely look into using a different hosting site and making some of the changes suggested (ass pics included). Hopefully the new site will be ready to launch sometime next week.

 

xo Ken

[Juan Vancouver]

Hey Ken,

 

Great job! It looks really good, I just want to point out at a few things:

 

1. Pop up was confusing but didn't think was a deal breaker. I still continued looking.

 

2. As someone already pointed out there is a inconsistency in rates. Make sure you always send a clear message. If people have to call you to double check, they might pass.

 

3. If you are going to have a calendar, make sure there is something on it. If you are not travelling often, it might be best to list dates, instead of having a calendar. Anything would be better than having an empty calendar with Holidays listed. You want to create the impression you are in high demand and successful.

 

4. This is a personal thing, you should never mention other hot men in your ad. You should be the only hot man your ad reminds us of. Your write : "There's no shortage of sexy men out there, so I'm flattered that I've caught your eye". I would change it to "I'm very flattered I caught your eye". Period.

 

5. The copy is a tiny bit short. I'd love to get a sense of who you are, of what sets you apart from others, of what would make my time special if I hired you. I have the feeling you might be on the modest side, which is great for the way you interact with others; when it comes to marketing, however, a touch of boastfulness goes a long way.

 

6 Location, location, location. Make sure we know -in every single page we click on your site- where you are. If you are locationless you are just a hot guy, if I know where you are, you become an actual possible hire.

 

Congratulations on getting it done. This site will work well for a while and when you are ready to upgrade go for it, but as it is it shows people how professional you are.

 

I wish you lots of success and a fulfilling career!

[+ WmClarke]

Well, I don't have "butts", just have the one. Here it is, if you really wanna see it. ;-Phttp://s28.postimg.org/nn6lri13x/image.jpg

Not just see it, that's for sure....

[Ken Woods]

2. As someone already pointed out there is a inconsistency in rates. Make sure you always send a clear message. If people have to call you to double check, they might pass.

Thanks for your feedback, Juan. But could you (or anyone else) please specify where you see an inconsistency with my rates? I know @latbear4blk said it was on my "About" page, but I didn't see it there. I got rid of the hourly rate field altogether since it's already on my rates page, but I just want to make sure I'm not still confusing anyone

 

Ken

[+ José Soplanucas]

Thanks for your feedback, Juan. But could you (or anyone else) please specify where you see an inconsistency with my rates? I know @latbear4blk said it was on my "About" page, but I didn't see it there. I got rid of the hourly rate field altogether since it's already on my rates page, but I just want to make sure I'm not still confusing anyone

 

Ken

 

I just checked it and it is not there anymore. Inconsistency cleared out.