Prime Muscle's Revised Web Site

[Prime Muscle]

Hello All - About 3 weeks ago I published my first web site and had lots of good suggestions and some not so good suggestions. I've kept the home page the same for personal reasons but have added an escort page with rates and pictures. Take a look and let me know what you think

 

http://www.musclefun.com/escort

[Guest bottomboykk]

All in all, it looks good. Like the pics. Like the simple design. While I understand the need for discretion, I wish you had at least one full face pic.

 

A couple of comments on the design:

[ol][li]I think you should make your location more prominent. You have buried a reference to "KC" but it would be better to prominently state your location for those who just happen upon your site.

[li]Get rid of the underlines. Underlines on web sites should solely be used for links. The rules of Information Architecture for the web demonstrate that users expect underlined text to be links and are frustrated when nothing happens when they click on the text.[/ol]

[marc anthony]

Prime:

 

I agree with bbkk... the two things I would change are getting rid of the underline on the title headings (I tried to click them initially), and displaying your home location in a more prominent place.

 

The face pic is your call... not all escorts want that prominently displayed on the internet, and there is one pic there that shows quite enough of your face to prove that above the neck matches below the neck quite well.

[Prime Muscle]

Good suggestions Bottomboy -- I've made a few minor changes. Thanks

[Guest jwraustin]

Nice site....I am impressed with the way you handled the gallery....and I really like the fact that you got all that on one page, without seeming to be crowded. Nicely organized. The site downloaded quickly.

 

As far as the face pic goes, I personally wouldnt worry about it. The site is to get their interest, and if they are really serious about booking an appointment, you can always send them a face pic when its obvious they are serious. Discretion is a two way street.

 

Nicely done

 

Jon Dean

http://www.manfuck.net

[Guest bottomboykk]

Looks good!

 

And I should've said earlier, you look damn good yourself! }> Wish you were closer!

[marc anthony]

Prime: Looks good... but you know the link below your signature takes you to a different page than the one you have up in the beginning of this thread (the new corrected one has /escort at the end of the address).

 

Not sure where you have all your ads and links posted, but you want to send people to the correct page.

[BuckyXTC]

Bobby:

 

Very nice....well designed and quick to load. I like it.

Best wishes for lots of good business

[Guest breezer2]

The pics are way too small. You should have a link to a pic page where they can be bigger.

[Guest bottomboykk]

um...ever think of clicking on the pics so they'll be bigger? Ever hear of thumbnails?

[Guest jwraustin]

>The pics are way too small. You should have a link to a pic

>page where they can be bigger.

 

 

You click on the picture and larger picture appears. I got it right the first time.

 

Jon Dean

http://www.manfuck.net

[Traveller]

>You click on the picture and larger picture appears. I got

>it right the first time.

 

Not if you go to the link below his name as Marc Anthony noted in post 6 above. I was a Myron and went to the wrong site the first time also; and no shots last night either. I'd also suggest correcting all listing. Some of us are really stupid.

 

Later.

[Guest sdmuscl4hire]

Sorry, I know we were to be reviewing something but I forgot what it was. BUT DAMN THAT IS ONE GORGEOUS HUNK