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[sexualoutlaw]

http://sexualoutlaw.blogspot.com/

 

check me out

tell me what you think

this is new to me

not at all sure this idea works...

[PoppedRice]

Hmm...I'm liking it...a lot!

 

Succinctly lyrical, yet vivid even w/ the terseness of words. The imagery definitely lingers in my mind.

 

I'm bookmarking it! :*

 

-PoppedRiced

[Rod Hagen]

Hot stuff! I like it.

 

Small critique: in poetry, try not to use words like "amazing"; you can always find something more descriptive.